Where the tui shows off to his friends in the beaming sun.
Where the ocean waves are dancing in the breeze, with the water spraying on them.
Where the crabs are playing hide and seek in the beautiful blue water.
Where if you go up a hill, you will see Bethany camp ground hiding behind Kaiteri.
Where the shells dig into your feet on shimmery sand.
Where is my favourite place?
Kaiteri.
Hi Imogen
ReplyDeleteYou are a great writer
I cannot wait till your next piece
My favourite line is where the ocean waves are dancing in the breeze, with the water spraying on them!
I love it
How do you do it?
Fantastic job Immy. This is so cool. I really like the part where you say "the crabs play hide and seek in the beautiful blue sea". I will make sure to look out for crabs next time I'm in Kaiteri. Good job .
ReplyDeleteNice work immy I like the detail that you used your words and how you it all made sense
ReplyDeleteWell done Imogen it is a great story
ReplyDeletewell done immy its a nice poem but were you at kaiteri.
ReplyDeleteYes
DeleteI limy l love this story it is so good
ReplyDeleteit has same great language
I can't wait to see your next peace of writing